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Wolfgang Eistert (53345)
Junior Member
Username: 53345
Post Number: 229
Registered: 3-2003
| | Posted on Wednesday, April 30, 2003 - 3:22 am: | |
Jack,
....as we will only have 1 pc. of it
....we will only have 1 of them
Call this section:
BUY OR DIE !!!
Wolfgang |
Jack Habits (Ferraristuff)
Member
Username: Ferraristuff
Post Number: 311
Registered: 4-2003
| | Posted on Tuesday, April 29, 2003 - 7:52 pm: | |
Thanks Dave!
Jack |
Dave (Maranelloman)
Intermediate Member
Username: Maranelloman
Post Number: 1324
Registered: 1-2002
| | Posted on Tuesday, April 29, 2003 - 7:51 pm: | |
Looks good to me, Jack! As for this: "as we will only have 1 pc. of it", you can also just say "we will only have 1 of them." |
Jack Habits (Ferraristuff)
Member
Username: Ferraristuff
Post Number: 309
Registered: 4-2003
| | Posted on Tuesday, April 29, 2003 - 7:35 pm: | |
Sorry to bother you with this but I don't know if I am using the right wording for the message.
On our website, we have a section which is called "Expected soon", announcing items that will arrive within the next month or so.
In the item description, I am using the following text:
>>>
We expect to have this manual in stock by the end of May. Don't hesitate to pre-order it now as we will only have 1 pc. of it. Will be shipped & billed as soon as it comes in.
<<<
Is that proper English to get the message across?
All help would be greatly appreciated.
Jack |