a zonda drawing for you guys!

Since all of you guys made so many nice comments on my last piece i figure out ill put out another one. The theme is still the same, rich vs poor....and this time its an pagani which has parked in the wrong area lol...

 

Dude, that is some seriously illmatic talent you have there... Very nice work... Thanks for sharing...

 

It got a nice giggle out of me.

 

I really enjoy your art I sent a PM with my email if you have any more pictures.

 

Very nice drawing! Love the way you captured the light.

 

Amazing drawing.

 

Good doggie!

DL

 

HA! I love Zondas, but that is very funny,good work

 

Really great work, I think I am seeing some minor perspective issues with the two front fenders? I'm really not quite sure what is doing it, but I just get a vague sense of some perspective problem when I look at the picture, nothing that big, just a bit unsettling. Awesome shading and great capturing of the light. Got a good laugh from me.

 

Very cool work!
The dog is a nice touch, too, but Id never let a dog pee on my car...

 

Lukas, thats an awesome drawing! I draw cars too, does anyone have a request as of what to draw?

 

355B

 

boy, that's a beauty

 

haha thanks guys for the comments! I think the dog is a nice touch on the drawing, it makes the whole thing a little more funny.
thanks again guys!

 

FerrariSlave, your car should be done by tommorow. Its lookin pretty good so far

 

Two thumbs up!
Nice stuff!

 

With a talent like that you will be driving these cars in the future.

 

You seem to be having some issues with perspective and realistic use of shadow.

As far as the perspective goes, try to plot the lines of the car more before you finalize its positioning -- the front end looks as if it is drawn from two angles. This is most noticeable when comparing the headlights.

In regards to shadow, you have drawn the shadow of the car in such a way that the shadow of the dog's leg on the car is impossible...or vice versa. The same goes for the garbage, and for the seats of the car -- the shadow is totally off. Also, you wouldn't be able to see into the car very well with the lighting coming from behind the car as it is for the front shadow.

Understand that I am not trying to insult you, rather to critique your artwork as I am in fact an art student (college) and have taken many natural life & mechanical drawing classes. I hope these suggestions help you to better you technique in future work -- and please continue to post it on F-Chat so I can enjoy it!

Cheers,
Richard

 

FerrariSlave, heres your 355. I cant seem to get a good picture of it though... Its far more detailed that it looks in this picture (it even has an inspection sticker on the windsheild!). Ill try to get some pictures outside when its bright out...Enjoy
PS, Im only 13 too... how old are you, Lukas?
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Thats what I was looking at. The dogs shadow is flat, the light is on the left-rear, and every other shadow is ok. And the windshield. There would be no light coming through.

 

Thats perfect ETW you should sell your peaces that looks great how about a 360 CS from the side. ? Your picture is perfect..... THX

 

Ah the having to mention age again. Why did you do that? When it comes to possible talents/skills, age matters not vs how long you've actually been doing it.

 

Thanks for your comments! Im quite new to drawing so im not always sure on lightning and shadows etc. So thanks for the help there....
But the for perspective, i think its quite good, if you look at the front end of a zonda you will se it doesn't have a flat front....so on that one im not sure if i agree actually...

Ofcourse i understand you dont try to insult me...lol...its a good thing when people can tell me whats wrong etc....

thanks again all you guys who comments on my drawing!

 

The front end is correct detail-wise, but not in regards to perspective. It has a lot to do with the way your headlights are "pointing". As for knowing the details of a Zonda, we had one here at our school last fall because Horacio Pagani was a guest of honor at our school. Below are some links to photos I took of the car, perhaps they will help you solve the perspective issue...

http://files.deepabyss.com/sa/zonda_01.jpg
http://files.deepabyss.com/sa/zonda_02.jpg
http://files.deepabyss.com/sa/zonda_03.jpg
http://files.deepabyss.com/sa/zonda_04.jpg
http://files.deepabyss.com/sa/zonda_05.jpg

 

Did you draw that from your head or did you look at a 355 or a picture of a 355. ? Never the less its great