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Discussion in 'Creative Arts' started by F430GB, May 23, 2010.

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  1. F430GB

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    #1 F430GB, May 23, 2010
    I decided to create a new intro for my future videos. It's a 5 second intro, so it's not that long. Tell me what you think; should I keep it, or make a new one?

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CMNXHs_EoyI

    Thanks!
    -G.B.
     
  2. F430GB

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    #2 F430GB, May 23, 2010
  3. Paul_308

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    #3 Paul_308, May 23, 2010
    Too fast - doesn't invite. Cut the images in half and double the frames used.
     
  4. F430GB

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    #4 F430GB, May 24, 2010
    Thanks for your input. Are you refering to the first or second intro that I posted? I assume the first...

    -G.B.
     
  5. essdime

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    #5 essdime, May 25, 2010
    a friend of mine makes exotic videos for a local shop. check out his work at www.exlfilms.com this may give you some ideas. i find that close ups and depth of field really adds to he "dramatic feel"
     
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    #6 F430GB, May 25, 2010
    Thanks for the tip! He does excellent work! :cool:

    -G.B.
     
  7. Edward 96GTS

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    #7 Edward 96GTS, May 26, 2010
    xelfilms video does not download
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  8. JMDesign

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    #8 JMDesign, May 28, 2010

    Loved that one, but still going to say the same thing i was going to say about the first one. The ferrarilover Title at the end is a bit too bland to fit the rest of the movie, almost out of place. Other than that its sweet!
     
  9. F430GB

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    #9 F430GB, May 28, 2010
    Thank you!! I'm using Windows Movie Maker, so I'm very limited as to how I present the Ferrarilovr title in the end; I will, however, keep toying with it to see if I can make something better. Thanks for your input! :)

    -G.B.
     

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